I'm not really one for reading poems online... Or really at all. I had enough of poems at school, thanks.
But I like this one; it's stupid, it's crazy and it makes me want to jump up and dance. The energy you portrayed throughout this piece (whether it is a bit of a piss take or not) makes me giggle and smile; this is a brilliant piece if you take it with a pinch of salt.
sounds like a way to go.
just say when and where,
so that everyone who want to join in, can,
and all who want to stare,
or gock can have some to talk about, the next day?
But I like this one; it's stupid, it's crazy and it makes me want to jump up and dance. The energy you portrayed throughout this piece (whether it is a bit of a piss take or not) makes me giggle and smile; this is a brilliant piece if you take it with a pinch of salt.