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  • mantis3216

    mantis3216 (100)

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    This poem is Epic! Very neatly written and I love your use of words.
    December 13th, 2011 at 10:26am
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    I am judging for the contest :D This is really good. The choice of words is a lot different to most poems and it seems to fit really well. It's a pretty good rhyme, as it doesn't sound forced. It creates a beautiful scene to me, it's really well done :)

    If you would like to know what points you got, please message me and I'll tell you :) Check into the contest to see who won soon!
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • SarahPhobic

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    Oh.my.goodness.
    This is really good, better than most poems I've read.
    Make more?
    (:
    December 24th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • katakanaLOVE

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    I like this a lot. You use a really interesting choice of words, not many people can fit that kind of vocabulary so easily into a poem. It makes it so much more real that way! (:
    December 24th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • Grand R

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    Aww, I didn't know you were a poet, Pepper! Ha ha. This was really sweet, man(:

    xoxo
    December 21st, 2010 at 08:03am