I am judging for the contest :D This is really good. The choice of words is a lot different to most poems and it seems to fit really well. It's a pretty good rhyme, as it doesn't sound forced. It creates a beautiful scene to me, it's really well done :)
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I like this a lot. You use a really interesting choice of words, not many people can fit that kind of vocabulary so easily into a poem. It makes it so much more real that way! (: