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  • icandobetter

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    Love this poem massively.
    March 28th, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • T.A. Crimson

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    Beautiful! : )
    January 21st, 2011 at 04:06am
  • CrimsonIce Mustang

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    Again, beautiful work. Sadly, I can relate to this one as well.
    January 12th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • Bre the Human

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    This is really good and really sad
    December 30th, 2010 at 04:23pm
  • ilyHowCouldINot

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    This is really good usually i hate rhyming (especially for serious poems) but, i dont know it just seems to work. And that secong line in the first stanza? Friggin amazing. Keep up the good work.
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:37pm
  • XxFiTZixX

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    i love the words you used, but very sad, ive been there a thousand times but just the genders were switched around :/ anyways, keep it up and i hope things fix
    December 27th, 2010 at 09:10am
  • Missmaestorm

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    really good, but kinda sad. but still. its good :)
    December 24th, 2010 at 06:42pm
  • DrowningInSorrow

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    to feel like this isnt fun but at least you know you can still feel.i can relate
    December 22nd, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • In The Moment

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    Great poem! it has feeling and it moves alot of people just through the words its saying. AMAZING! :D
    December 22nd, 2010 at 06:08am
  • r.tistique

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    I really really like this. Relatable and makes me want to cry because it has so much raw emotion and brings back memories. Well written!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 05:48am
  • June_Music_C

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    Wow. Your poem is definetly amazing. Its also very easy fgor many people who have had hard times like this to relate to. I know I did.
    December 22nd, 2010 at 03:21am
  • Lex love161

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    I can totally relate
    Great job on this babe
    December 21st, 2010 at 10:40am
  • champion;

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    Wow, i really... liked this, haha. Not sure if that was the right word.
    I can relate kind of... Me and my best friend, that whole thing thats going on... yeah...
    December 21st, 2010 at 06:31am
  • MissLonely

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    It's a great poem sweets.
    Really deep. =] <3
    December 21st, 2010 at 04:06am
  • Happily Forgotten;

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    I like this. :)
    I like how it tells a story.
    December 20th, 2010 at 06:04am
  • the end has no end;

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    [i]Beautiful[/i]. I can relate
    December 19th, 2010 at 10:22pm
  • ajgonemad

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    i like this.nice job
    December 19th, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • theydonothaveaheart

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    i think you would like mu poem ' the day you whispered i love you'
    it is alot like this one and i hope it shows abit of your feelings too its how i felt
    December 19th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • theydonothaveaheart

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    good Poem
    Sad Feelings i KNow them all to well :/
    December 19th, 2010 at 09:08pm
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