(Sorry if this comment isn't that good, but I accidently closed it when I was nearly finished) I am judging for the contest :D. I like this. It's really well written. It flows and there's a little bit of rhyme which is good too. It shows the meaning of the word clearly and you described it well. I don't really like the way the words are pink, but that's just my opinion (and it might just be because I like pink...). The only line I think could have been put better is "I think about you daily, my head you never leave". Overall, this poem is great!
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