Survival of the fittest - Comments

ChasingADaydream16 (100)

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love it

April 6th, 2011 at 10:26pm

Miss_Metallica_Ninja (100)

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Haha thanks guys =) It was originally written as a song.. but I posted it as a poem =) Its my first poem ive written so Im glad its good

January 28th, 2011 at 03:20pm

XSecret_SuicideX (100)

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I have to agree with spacejunkie on everything. sept for the first comment thing since I am second...I'm the first winning loser lol....ahem anyway...

This was really good. I actually sang it in my head and then out loud. Not sure why though...anyway I really liked it. Had a nice flow to it, completely again awesome. *mentally favorites it*

January 28th, 2011 at 03:14pm

spacejunkie (100)

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I like this line:

"Your stare, icy glare," and how it repeats. It's a nice rhyme. Nice poem, too.

Congratulations on your first comment!

January 28th, 2011 at 03:07pm