Architect Of The Soul - Comments

whoa! Love the title :D The poem itself was good too. Well deserving of the placement :)

You did amazingly good. I congradulate you.

I like this a lot- the title especially. All too often people don't take into consideration exactly what kind of impact a title can make (or they're like me and can't come up with any good ones XD), and come up with something that doesn't really make you want to read it.

The imagery was beautiful, and the comparisons to a doll worked very well.

You did a good job. :]

I can relate to this because the guy I'm still in love with that stole my soul n heart persay has brown eyes :O But anyway, I thought imagery and comparison of her being like a doll was a good way to describe her. You write very well and I was intrigued by the title :P

Honestly, I don't think I can say much about this one. I've covered how talented and amazing your poems are already in the previous ones, and I'd feel exactly like a broken record saying it again. You're an amazing poem writer, each one has been deep and amazing, and this one is no exception,

i love this poem its beauteful and i can some wha relate to some of this great job

This is really cool! You did a wonderful job writing it, and the imagery (my favorite part of poetry) is excellent! :)

This is a great poem
Criticism: I'm having a hard time finding something to criticize. I guess I would say that there seems to be a bit of a discrepancy because she seems to be trying to protect the soul that the brown eyed bow stole. Also doll doesn't rhyme perfectly with soul.
Compliment: what to compliments first? hmmm. You are a wonderful writer. I love the imagery/metaphor with the doll. It's slightly genius. You also had an amazing ending. There's some awesome imagery. Throughout the poem, especially at the end I felt like I was there with you. Like I could feel and see what you were describing. That's what makes a great poem great, the fact that you can make me the reader feel.
It's an absolutely beautiful poem. I love it♥

Very deep indeed.
It makes me wonder the character and what has happened.
Thought provoking-ness.

I like this. It's very deep.