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  • fascination.

    fascination. (100)

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    I love the title of this. It just I don't know, it's just really good <3
    I really liked this, a lot actually
    it shows her feelings for the person she is talking about very well
    and how much she wants to be with him is apparent
    I also like how you got the title in the poem itself as well :)
    <33 it!
    February 4th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • still waters;

    still waters; (100)

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    You have a perfect way of setting the emotion in your poems within just the first line. It keeps the reader really wanting more and more. These are really good! (:
    January 30th, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • Lethally Inked

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    I love the emotion and tone in this poem. Your word choice was great, and I like the story that this poem has. It is also something I can relate to, which increased everything I enjoyed about it.
    January 12th, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • Thor

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    The title is really amazing
    I can relate because im also shy and a big dreamer
    Your wording you used is beautiful and thats the only way i know how to describe it.
    Alot of emotion in this poem
    loved it<3
    January 11th, 2011 at 10:47pm
  • Sixxgirl

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    i think it is great!!
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:41am
  • Ashleyy Yo

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    I really like this one =)
    December 31st, 2010 at 10:23am
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