One Day We'll Walk Across That Bridge Together - Comments

  • Sixxgirl

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    i agree. but it is extraordnary writing!!!! :3
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • InsomniacDreams

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    This poem feels wonderfully nostalgic and loving. There are some great parts of it but it feels just a bit wordy to me. still nice, just seems overlong. good poem ♥
    January 3rd, 2011 at 02:00am