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Natalie!!
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Really nice imagery and more of a story than you'd get out of a lot of the other freaking masterpieces you've written.
January 3rd, 2011 at 01:54am
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I like this :) It tells a story, but it tells it in a nice, descriptive, poetic way.
I would watch your tenses though, because I think you switched from one to another halfway through the poem.
January 3rd, 2011 at 12:01am
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