January 3rd, 2011 at 10:20pm
Winter tragic - Comments
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woah....thats really all i can say. i loved this...A LOT.....thanks for writing this! it has inspired me...January 3rd, 2011 at 03:01am
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My favorite. By far. And when I say 'far' I mean the distance between here and the moon, plus a trip to Wawa right before you head to Cuba. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I do believe that's decently far, and you'd best believe so, too.January 3rd, 2011 at 02:10am
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This poem was absolutely beautiful. The flow of the words are amazing and the stanzas pulled my heart and emotions. I don't care if this poem was sad, which it was, it was still a very creatively written poem. You have a talent in poetry my friend, please keep it up.January 3rd, 2011 at 01:28am
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This is beautiful. I love the entire grouping from "it's going to happen again" to "as to continue this tragedy to the end."
It's all flowing very well, with smooth rhymes, once again, and the emotions in it are sad, but in a very nice, artistic way. If you get what I mean? It's great.January 3rd, 2011 at 01:03am -
Oh wow. A lot of my English professors have told me that the last line of the poem is the most important, and the last line of this one nearly knocked the breath out of me. The poem all together is excellent and sad. But a pretty sad. I enjoyed it c:January 2nd, 2011 at 11:38pm
nuff said
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