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  • ilikethedark

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    I really do love it, but I must say Im left quite puzzled by it.. What does it all mean?
    January 30th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • Gab?

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    This poem was good! To be honest, I was a bit confused but then I understood it. Idk if anyone here read the last book of the Hunger Games series, but anyways it kind of relates to the song that Katniss sang about the dead man calling to his wife. The positions are just vice versa here. Anyone else agree with me?
    January 21st, 2011 at 04:41am
  • Burned

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    I'm a bit confused about it but i like what i'm not confused about. is the person saying he'll love the corpse? I'm really confused and i feel dumb because everyone else likes it.
    January 13th, 2011 at 02:07am
  • RK-Val

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    I thought it was really good. I liked how you kept repeating the line, it made sure to "drill" the point of what you were aiming at.
    January 11th, 2011 at 04:07am
  • CC seduction

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    i apologize for the error -.- i was to busy looking at what that freak was all about to check your profile. >.< this is great though, don;'t listen to him.
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:32pm
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    Donatello, David, Oops i mean pokemon FREAK, hop off her writing!
    This is actually great.
    From the heart? you know? FEELING? why don't you go hang out with your "great friends" instead of putting people down over the internet?
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:30pm
  • Donatello;;

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    Absolutely pathetic poem. No real grammar, no subtlety and no real rythm. I'm unimpressed to the point where I want to vomit. How could you write this, put it on Mibba and feel good about it? It's God awful.
    January 6th, 2011 at 03:11pm
  • night assassin

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    woah.... pretty good
    January 5th, 2011 at 10:08pm
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