Treating her... - Comments

Donatello has problems this is the third poem Donatello has written a rude comment on. Don't listen to them. It was great and really expressed what needs to be said.

i understand where you are coming from with this story. it makes me feel like an abused woman again

Read this, with one breath. I challenge you, breathe in once and read the entire poem. Because with the grammar you're using, that's what you'd have to do. Full stops are your friends. Also it was a bad poem.

*thumbs up*