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  • imbalance

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    I am judging for the contest :D

    What I liked: Wow. I loved how short this was and how you wrote it. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme but I think it's better that way. It's just beautiful.

    What I disliked: Nothing really..only this line "Understand it side"..is it supposed to be "Understand it's side"?
    February 12th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • April Showers

    April Showers (100)

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    This poem is beautiful. :]
    And so, so true, too. <3
    January 11th, 2011 at 02:07am
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