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  • Glass.butterfly

    Glass.butterfly (100)

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    HelloImnaked, Ive seen you comment on about 6 poems and EVERY SINGLE ONE you judge them and critise them. Hello, this is a creative writing community, we should be able to write how we feel and not have other people tell us our poems are bad, or have a bad impression.

    I really liked this poem(:
    January 8th, 2011 at 05:52pm
  • HelloI'mNaked

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    This poem is not in the least bit poetic. I'm chastising you not only for lack of quality, but also for poor grammar and word usage. I assume "Him" is referring to God, and as a firm believer in God being a pompous jerk, I beg to argue. God is but a tool that some choose to use; not everyone believes in him, which leaves me to question to relevancy of this Poem. Overall bad impression, better luck next time.
    January 8th, 2011 at 03:52pm
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