Awe, you put so much emotion into such few words. I love how you can do this so easily. I LOVE reading your poems, they always bring a smile to my face, whether the emotion of the poem is sad/happy/depressive. It's just because they're so good. (:
I thought this was so sweet. I love the emotion weaved into the whole poem; it is so rare that I find a poem on here that is packed with emotion such as this one. The tone of the poem, to me, seems desperate -- like the person is desperate to get this other person. But that is just me. Anyway, I really liked this poem. I am glad that I read this poem for it is one of the best I have read on here.
This was so simple and clear. I love poetry like this, that just shows you how it is. It was really good that you got a lot of emotion into such a short poem. I wish I knew how to get into depth with this but I'm just terribly hopeless when it comes to poetry. I really wish I could write it, you've got talent for it. It's also good to see you still writing poetry simply because you like to do it. I know how dead the poetry section can be and its refreshing to see somebody writing for themselves.