Two Souls... - Comments

Shizzy (100)

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Again Luv it!! :) <3

May 20th, 2011 at 05:41pm

ScreamingIntheNight (100)

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omg, that is so beautiful

May 11th, 2011 at 02:35am

gingerbreadhouse (100)

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i love this poem

May 9th, 2011 at 02:10am

samanthalannay (100)

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i love it it is so true

May 2nd, 2011 at 05:55pm

VeiledInsanity (150)

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Great poem! Awesome imagery, it really captures you, and I have to agree, I love the ending :)

April 19th, 2011 at 03:22am

pronetobeingalone (100)

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I loved this! Especially the ending 'happiness 'tis just a word, Destiny has been stirred.' It sounds like the final lines of a prophecy or something else thats mystical and mysterious and eery but still really interesting. I know i may have just confused you so i'll leave it at this poem is too good for words to describe. bl00dcurs3d xo

March 13th, 2011 at 04:22pm

Dallie_ (100)

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this is beautiful

March 10th, 2011 at 10:41pm

hopes anchor (100)

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I really like this :)

January 20th, 2011 at 09:52pm

winter23593 (100)

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love it i may sound like an english teacher but the imagry is powerful, it realy pushes the poem forward.

January 20th, 2011 at 09:18pm

Requiem.For.A.Dream (100)

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this is nice. I really like this part the best! not sure exactly why but this is good x3

How I might catch fire?
Maybe if I closely listen
To your heart that glistens
I'll see a thing with wings
An angel that sings
Cherish your very being
I'll make you dream

January 12th, 2011 at 09:19pm