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    The Doctor (105)

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    I like this poem a lot. The only advise I can think to give is a bit more punctuation at the ends of lines so I know if you're still asking questions or if you're answering the question you did use the question mark on.
    Good work :3
    January 13th, 2011 at 03:21am
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