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  • Vintage Vengeance

    Vintage Vengeance (100)

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    Wow, I read it like 5 times before i posted it, I have no idea why i didn't see it before x3

    But thank you : )
    January 14th, 2011 at 09:18am
  • persianninjatkd

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    Pretty Good, My favorite line is
    "Now whenever the skies turn grey
    I know you're gonna chase them away"
    oh but one thing, you misspelled "waist" which should be "waste". =)
    January 13th, 2011 at 06:56pm
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