Thank you! I'll make the last line darker, I wasn't sure whether it should be really light or not.
January 15th, 2011 at 03:24am
I really like this. It's short, but beautiful language. I like how you personified the sun. :)
Oh and I love the colors and how you made the important stuff stand out!! :)
The only critique i have is that you might want to make the last line a little darker. It was kind of hard for me to read, but i can see how you might want to make it fade out. Loved it though!!