February 17th, 2011 at 07:53pm
A Lie Like You - Comments
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awesome! a lot better than my writingFebruary 13th, 2011 at 03:46am
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This is really good, and I know the feeling all too well. I just went thru this.February 10th, 2011 at 09:02am
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Beautiful is the only word that can describe this
Love it so much
<3February 8th, 2011 at 12:06am -
I'm really liking the metaphors of wings and tides in this. It didn't rhyme but it had a good flow. It's a sad poem, but I like how in the last verse there was hope with a little bit of malice, "[i]I hope that you van live with the guilt...[/i]"
Good job! :)February 3rd, 2011 at 02:22am -
I love this! It's so realistic and I know people can definitely relate to it. I love how you write - it seems like all these words just like flowed together on here and i love it.
Ah, I've said "love" so many times, but I can't help it. xDJanuary 30th, 2011 at 11:22pm -
I love the way this poem was written! And you did a great job; it made me very sad but that's good that you write so strong that you can convey your feelings across to your readers.January 18th, 2011 at 04:46am
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this is really good. i know how you feel sweetie. you really nailed your emotion on this. talk to me any time you know that.January 18th, 2011 at 02:11am
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This was really good. I've never been all that great with poetry so I find it really hard to comment on it and critique it only because I know wo little about it. So I'm not entirely sure what I liked about this, I just know that I did. I liked the part where you mentioned the tides changing, it gave off some really nice imagery.January 16th, 2011 at 05:52am
I love all of it, such a great writer you are :]
Everyone hates lies, especially whent those lies once meant alot to you. I think you described the feeling really emotively and passionately.
I could really feel all the emotion.
Awesome