A Lie Like You - Comments

I love the mataphors, the description, the wording
I love all of it, such a great writer you are :]
Everyone hates lies, especially whent those lies once meant alot to you. I think you described the feeling really emotively and passionately.
I could really feel all the emotion.
Awesome

awesome! a lot better than my writing

This is really good, and I know the feeling all too well. I just went thru this.

Beautiful is the only word that can describe this
Love it so much
<3

I'm really liking the metaphors of wings and tides in this. It didn't rhyme but it had a good flow. It's a sad poem, but I like how in the last verse there was hope with a little bit of malice, "[i]I hope that you van live with the guilt...[/i]"

Good job! :)

I love this! It's so realistic and I know people can definitely relate to it. I love how you write - it seems like all these words just like flowed together on here and i love it.
Ah, I've said "love" so many times, but I can't help it. xD

I love the way this poem was written! And you did a great job; it made me very sad but that's good that you write so strong that you can convey your feelings across to your readers.

this is really good. i know how you feel sweetie. you really nailed your emotion on this. talk to me any time you know that.

This was really good. I've never been all that great with poetry so I find it really hard to comment on it and critique it only because I know wo little about it. So I'm not entirely sure what I liked about this, I just know that I did. I liked the part where you mentioned the tides changing, it gave off some really nice imagery.