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  • xpaintmeblackx

    xpaintmeblackx (100)

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    lmfao.
    i will.
    =]
    baha.
    don't remind me of school.
    lmao.
    =D <3
    March 9th, 2007 at 06:01pm
  • Quinn Allman.

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    Kaylee me lovee<3
    Love it.
    When we start our band in the future proche, you must write the songs
    oh yes Kaylen
    oh yes
    LOVE IT!
    =D
    March 9th, 2007 at 02:52am
  • lisamargaret

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    Hey.

    Wow, I really like this. I totally get what you're saying.

    It's pretty awesome.

    Except the last paragraph seems kind of cliche to me.

    Although I shouldn't be the one to talk, considering the whole poem I wrote is a walking cliche.

    But anywhoo.

    Hope to see more of your work in the future.
    March 9th, 2007 at 01:42am
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