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  • pronetobeingalone

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    This is a beautifully written poem, great structure and use of colour and repetition to make some parts really stand out. Reading this, i felt like it should be a rock/grunge song, it would be perfect for a band like Nirvana (im a bit obsessed with them:) anyways, no bad critique here, you did an awesome job, keep on writin' !!!

    ox bloodcursed13 xo
    February 3rd, 2011 at 08:10pm
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    DUDE THIS IS A FREAKING AWESOMETACULAR POEM!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH, YOU DONT EVEN KNOW!!! XD
    AND THE COLORING IS KIND OF FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!! ;D
    -V ;)
    January 29th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • Lmnop

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    ...long comment short, I love this more than gummy bears and freshly baked cinnamon buns. and seriously? who isn't obsessed with gummy bears?
    January 28th, 2011 at 02:11am
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