I love this poem. I felt like I said the same thing in one of my poems, but in a more objectifying, carnal way. So I like the contrast-- the positive energy in this poem. He or she, i guess, brightens this persons day, but not in that stereotypical way. I'm thinking of a Bruno Mars song, but I can't remember the words.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Anyways, keep up the good work.