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D. Dixon (100)

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short and sweet!
loved it!!!
this would be an awesome, idk, background (i guess youd say) for a story.
bravo!!

April 8th, 2008 at 11:56pm

x.Lost.Soul.x (100)

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This poem is short, but still good. I agree with XTheMissingPieceX, poetry will come to you at the worst times- like during a Test in school. That's what happened to me today. But, none the less, great poem. It's one of a kind. =)

February 2nd, 2008 at 02:12am

melancholy. (305)

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Isn't it weird how poems come to you at the worst times. It'll happen to me when I'm in the shower, doing my hair, or when I'm supose to be alseep.

February 2nd, 2008 at 01:10am