very deep^-^
February 18th, 2011 at 08:13pm
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wow. awesome. love it!February 18th, 2011 at 06:26pm
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This an amazing piece of poetry :]
Beautifull written and I loved the wording, especially the line
'Deceit and betrayal doth cloud thine eyes' it has a shakespearean feel to it due to the old english used.
It had a good steady beat, although on the first line i think you meant 'met' instead of 'meet'
Great job, <3February 18th, 2011 at 06:03pm -
this is beautifully written <3February 9th, 2011 at 10:24pm
