Why Can't You Love Me Back? - Comments

i like the title of this- though I think it'll be sad :/
ahh of course. the girl who loves the boy
btu the boy is too stupid to realize he has feelings for her too
and that she's everything he's needed and more
I've been through that. I know how it goes /
I really liked this- becuase you can tell the amount of emotion put into this
Boys are honestly idiots- I wish you the best of luck with them :3

Yea...I'm pretty sure we all could relate to this at one point or another.
I'm not that big on free-verse poems but sometimes they can be really good. Like now.

I really like how you list what you're willing to do? For lack of better word. Really good.(:

this poem describes how I feel right now going through a really tough break up with my boyfriend :(
Are you just blind to the torture I’m going through trying to deny that I love you this much?
The absolute torture that builds and builds and until I can take no more and I end in a flurry of tears.

Those two lines describe how much torture and pain I've been feeling this month and 5 days without him :/ you wrote this very well and I can feel your pain, not just because I'm going through it, but because your words evoke that feeling of heartbreak and unrequited love is you dubbed it in your journal that everybody feels. But hey, sometimes they have to go out with a few wrong girls before they realize the right one is right in front of them, don't give up. Just keep being there for him, maybe someday he'll realize you've always been there and you guys will get your chance. Really great poem <3

omgggggggg rthis is so me right now