let me just say, you have a way with words. this is pretty amazing. good job!(:
February 7th, 2011 at 09:03pm
I love all of it, but the last 2 stanzas, it seemed to kind of lose flow there to me, but I really only like dark stuff often, and that's where the darkness ended. I love how you worded it and the rhymes were great.
Plus, I love your username. I see a lot of talent in you =)