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  • Fronkensteen

    Fronkensteen (100)

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    Thanks, Darling. I wouldn't be surprised if it turns out I've written at least five different versions of this, but I think this is the one I prefer the most, save the fourth verse.
    March 28th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • yoshimi

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    you did change it, quite a lot... I think I like both versions :)
    March 28th, 2011 at 08:50pm
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