Where oh where did my comment on this go? o.O
DID I NOT HIT "SUBMIT" AGAIN? Dx I feel like such a spazz. -.-
Sooo, I THINK I wrote something along the lines of....This sounds almost like a song, because it has that rhythm and repetition of some phrases to it. :) I also think it sounds sweet, like the narrator cares about their Love a lot. The descriptions/metaphors are pretty cool. I LIKE IT. xD
DID I NOT HIT "SUBMIT" AGAIN? Dx I feel like such a spazz. -.-
Sooo, I THINK I wrote something along the lines of....This sounds almost like a song, because it has that rhythm and repetition of some phrases to it. :) I also think it sounds sweet, like the narrator cares about their Love a lot. The descriptions/metaphors are pretty cool. I LIKE IT. xD