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  • Sierra Kusterbeck

    Sierra Kusterbeck (100)

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    The lack of punctuation (minus the couple of commas) kind of threw me off; had there been more, I probably would have liked it a bit more. As it was, I liked the idea, but not quite the execution.

    And Uchiha- Naruto? If not, ignore me. xD
    April 10th, 2011 at 05:45am
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