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  • goodfornothing

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    The writing style is unique and even if it is in a sentence structure, it doesn't mistake itself for an actual sentence. I was surprise though when I read it, I could immediately tell it was a poem by the words. It's really good Josh.
    June 26th, 2012 at 06:23pm
  • Dead and Denial Inc.

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    I read this twice, and let me tell you I felt absolutely no hope the second time around. I can't even believe that. I usually have some back up reserve but..nada. I just don't understand how you pull readers in that deep with just a few sentences. A whole monolouge on fear nicely written I can understand, BUT A FEW SENTENCES! Its amazing. :D Honestly and truely.
    June 19th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • Halloweenlover

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    That was very descriptive. I noticed that you can make a poem short or long and it still rocks!! With me I have to make my poems long in order for them to sound decent or good. You have a talent and you manipulate words well. :)
    June 9th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • Baylee.Morose

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    Very nice //.^
    June 8th, 2012 at 10:41pm
  • Mike Donovan

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    Holy crap.
    July 17th, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • FirespunObsidian

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    Kool ^_^
    July 3rd, 2011 at 09:23am
  • Killjoychikadee

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    Chilling:)
    Very descriptive, a lot of meaning packed into such a short poem.
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:10am
  • Anotherday

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    i love how even though these are relly short there meaning is powerful,
    June 19th, 2011 at 03:20pm
  • death is nothing.

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    i really like this great job but you might want to format the poem more like this:
    "----------,
    -----------.
    ------------,
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    ----------------,
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    --------------------,
    -------------.'

    you dont have to take my feedback.
    i really LOOOOVE this poem, though.
    March 2nd, 2011 at 02:43am
  • Dallie_

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    Wonderfull Josh.
    February 27th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Ellie-phant

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    I just really love this.
    I wish it was longer./:
    February 24th, 2011 at 07:02am
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