Absinthe Makes the Heart Grow Fonder - Comments

This is really amazingly wonderfully super-fantastic-I-have-no-words-so-just-take-the-compliment. It's short but powerful and it catches you and... it's great.

OH wow This poem is amazing, I cant think of any other words that would do it justice.

Oh wow, this gave me chills! so well written! you have a true talent. The last line was really beautiful.

T.T Okay Josh, you totally need to let me carve this on my wall. I will so forever be in your debt. :D Pweases and tankyouz! This is by far my new favorite poem of the year, screw all the old artists. Hell, this may be my new favorite poem of the century!!!! <33

Have you ever thought of writing stories? You have something special and I bet your stories would be amazing!!

Amazingly amazing.

This poem is one of my favorites. Why? Because it feels so realistic. It's incredible. The way you can use your words and make a poem so alive.

"All the drops from the rain soak up my tears with sapphire pain."
Still my favorite line.
This poem is probably my favorite :)
It sounds so.. cool, and it flows so well. I like the images in it.

I wonder if you ever listened to ICP's "Amazing Maze". It kinda gave me that feeling. It's so kool, I got it in my head and laughed then had to go back and figure out why I was laughing.

this is amazing, short but powerful , well done!

This is one of my favorites so far. Of course, when I think of Wonderland, I think of a childhood story of rhymes and nonsense, but this.. When read carefully, is an all new world. If this was published, it would frorever change the image of wonderland to every person who reads it.

I love it. I don't think "Absinthe" is the word, but I could be wrong. It's veery well written. =]

To be completely honest, you should really consider getting your poems published. You could change lives.

I love the last line. So good

Wonderland. Well, it automatically makes me think about Alice. But your poem, those six lines, ripped away the innocent image of Alice in Wonderland. I've got to confess: it got me quite a bit confused when first reading it, but reading every line carefully all over again, I got the meaning behind it. Or at least what I interpreted. And that realization stunned me.
It means everything yet nothing. It's confusing, yet so clear. This is powerful, your words are. I guess you created a whole new "Wonderland" - your own Wonderland.

My love, I honestly think this peom wraps my mind into a time warp... Does that make any sense?
It blows my mind on levels that seem completely unreachable.
I feel like I'm not making any sense, but it doens't really matter.
It makes me feel like I'm in a state where everything is wrong, but somehow it's right.

I don't know why nobody's commented yet.
This is fantastic. One of the most uniquely spellbinding things I've ever read.
I'm going back to read it again.