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this is really quite amazing!

I can't even tell you what I felt here. I felt slightly pessimistic about the outcome of tomorrow, yet I could feel that uncertain, trembeling love that gave the narrator a chance to glimpse a happier future. I can't find words deep enough, or long enough, or complicated enough to tell you that this poem is one that I relate to, and that I look up to. Your an amazing writer, and one day I dream of writing like you. Being able to drag people in when they read the first few syllables, like you do. Your a master Josh. :D A true great who deserves a comment from every single person on Mibba. On any writing site really.

One word. Amazing.

I like these a lot.

very deep and amazingly written

This is yet another great one you have written. You're a great writer.

There is no words that can describe how amazing this poem is. How realistic it is. And like the one girl said a lot of people is able to relate to the poem. Great job. Write some more, please?

"When I'm deep in thought I overdose on reality" Very amazing
Alot of people can relate to this.
And I am one of those people

'When I'm in deep thought I overdose on reality.' That's powerful and brilliant and amazing. I love it. You can feel the emotion through the whole thing

This is cute! I absolutly adore it!(:
Is it a song? Dedicated to someone special?

This is amazing. It's really powerful and I love it. My favorite part is 'When I'm in deep thought I overdose on reality.' I think a lot of people could relate to this. I know I can. <3

This is relly powerful, its brilliant i love "when im deep in thought i overdose on reality" - live that line - relly brilliant

Amazing, again:) I am going to have to think of a new adjective... Incredible, marvelous, astounding. I can actually really relate to this.. and I could never describe it like this, but this is exactly how I feel sometimes.. ♥

Wow. I've never been able to read a poem and be able to FEEL the emotion behind words before. That was astounding.

This is really strong. I can tell you really put your emotions behind it. =)

This is so good, I love the words.
:)

this is awesome! :D

This is amazing, Man.

Absolutely beautiful! :)

wow
i fell for this poem :3
this is awesome