It's deffinately raw feeling. But it sounds more like a prose than a poem. Which isn't a bad thing at all, don't get me wrong. It's just good to know the difference between the two.
Also, when you comment back to people, comment on their profiles... They can't see your comments here unless they check the poem again.. And most people don't do that after they've read it once and have commented.
If you need anything else, just ask. Ive been on here since 2008 and I know the site pretty well:)
Also, when you comment back to people, comment on their profiles... They can't see your comments here unless they check the poem again.. And most people don't do that after they've read it once and have commented.
If you need anything else, just ask. Ive been on here since 2008 and I know the site pretty well:)