I have said this a few times: I don't like rhyme schemes. I feel they pull away from the possibility of greater depth and feeling more times than not. And then I read a poem like this one and find myself ecstatically surprised. Though I feel there is more that could be done with the ideals found within these stanzas (something I might play around with) I find that I like this poem and it contains a great deal of feeling and depth. Great job!
April 13th, 2011 at 05:54pm
