Slowly Slip - Comments

i cannot spell beutifal sorry :o

holy effing poop. This is brilliant. Thanks for posting it! Baeutifally wrote.

hey this is really good :)

what i would say though (if you dont mind my saying so) your imagery might be even better without the use of so many cliches ( the sun setting, the unknown path). If you can use another more original image instead of some of the cliches i think that this will turn from being very good to excellent. :D