I can't believe that there hasn't been any comments on this yet! This was absolutely fantastic. The imagery was definitely there, but not obnoxiously so (if that makes sense? It does in my head...).
The only negative thing is a typo in the end of the third stanza- "fustration" should be "frustration".
Unless that was meant to be "fustration", in which case I just learned a new word.
The only negative thing is a typo in the end of the third stanza- "fustration" should be "frustration".
Unless that was meant to be "fustration", in which case I just learned a new word.