I love this poem because of the unique way that it flows and its descriptiveness and also the image it creates in your head like a vague oil painting. beautiful but you cant make out what it is. mystery is a good trait to posses as many poets dont have that advantage. i loved the line 'your heart i will grip with my lips and the scale of time will tip' something like that. that was amazing. keep on writing! bl00dcurs3d xo