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  • LackofC0l0r

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    Lovely I can relate..its a great flow you have in the poem :]
    March 13th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • The Burning Rose

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    The flow was good overall, the end was a tad bit choppy. I loved it ^_^
    March 13th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • The Doctor

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    "Distract me from the pain inside. Distract me from my heart, It bleeds."
    That is a very good start. I loved it. The rhythm in the beginning catches one by surprise. The rhythm towards the end is a little unstable in its flow but like I said, the beginning was very good.~
    March 13th, 2011 at 05:07am
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