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  • Sierra Kusterbeck

    Sierra Kusterbeck (100)

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    This is really good. It has a very... I think "foreboding" is the word that I'm looking for, but it doesn't sound quite right.

    I also like that you repeated the second stanza- it really adds to that sense of whatever-the-right-word-is-that-I-can't-seem-to-find.
    April 19th, 2011 at 06:56am
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