The black portrait - Comments

  • elleisafrog46

    elleisafrog46 (150)

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    well i dont see the need for a spell check. maybe, just some changing of the "your" to "you're" since it changes the meaning. haha. nicey nicey!
    April 13th, 2008 at 04:04pm
  • maricarhojilla

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    jeez! it is creative writing...spell check ka da
    April 6th, 2008 at 07:51pm
  • FICTION

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    I like this one. You need a spell check, though.
    March 18th, 2008 at 11:19am