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fascination. (100)

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you found it :D
and i like it!
you're such a good poem writer mandy!
keep at it :)
i think you should add a little bit inbetween the
"tryign to wiggle my way out of this confrontation"
and "I still don't dare" because it seems kinda squished togehter,,
but other than that - lovveeeeee itt <3 like legit :)

March 25th, 2011 at 09:30pm

xXSamuraiHimeXx (100)

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Lovee This Poemm, But You Need To Develop It More. (:
It's A Greatt Piece, Just Don't Stopp :D

March 25th, 2011 at 04:19am

Shocking_Instability (100)

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No offence at all! but to me it seems unfinished.. I really really like it thougn

March 25th, 2011 at 04:04am