Run the blade - Comments

  • teya1997

    teya1997 (100)

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    I like this poem allot.
    Yes it's short but it has a deeper meaning just like Prophetess of Doom seed it's a great poem
    April 1st, 2011 at 02:46pm
  • Ave.Maria.

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    I love this poem. At first glance it reads simply as a nice rhyming poem but it's really got a greater and more heavier meaning behind it. It's very cleverly written and I admire the way you've written this so that you've got a short quick rhythm, but with a real serious and quiet cynical message. I love the idea and how you phrased the line and title of the poem; 'run the blade.'
    March 30th, 2011 at 10:21pm