I love this poem. At first glance it reads simply as a nice rhyming poem but it's really got a greater and more heavier meaning behind it. It's very cleverly written and I admire the way you've written this so that you've got a short quick rhythm, but with a real serious and quiet cynical message. I love the idea and how you phrased the line and title of the poem; 'run the blade.'
Yes it's short but it has a deeper meaning just like Prophetess of Doom seed it's a great poem