What do you see? - Comments

I love this poem (: You're a [i]wonderful[/i] poet.

sniff sniff..for some reason I'm seriously in the verge of tears =/ I think this is the best thing I've read in a loooooong time..it's so beautiful..

Fav parts:

"what do you see when you look at me?
a girl who cries herself to sleep?
or a girl who makes promises she does not keep."

"what do you see when you look into my eyes?
do you even see me build up my disguise
behind cold and gaurded eyes?

Do you ever notice me flinch?
or do you think its merely a nervous twitch.

Do you ever wonder what I wish for?
do you see that I am tore?

Like a bird with broken wings
all I can do is sing
I hope of course, but when has hope ever gotten a bird with broken wings very far?
Not when you can't even tell what my defenses are"

AND YES, I DO REALIZE I PUT ALMOST THE ENTIRE POEM HERE =P

i really like this (:

This is really good. :) I saw myself through every verse.