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thankyou very much, it means alot :D

I really like this poem. Its deep and sometimes I feel the same way. I feel as if I were falling deeper into a lie as my life goes on, but I learned to live with it. Unique and perfectly written. :)

thanks :) im glad you liked it and i dont know if thats a right interpretation or not, that's your interpretation, i dunno if its what i was saying or not, my minds a bit of a puddle of confusion haha, but im really glad you liked it, thanks :)

I feel that I understand what you're saying. I think many people who feel that no one sees their pain, because it is emotional, want something bad to happen to them or tell people something has. I feel like people want to justify their feelings. This is how I view it, sorry if I got it wrong. But I really did love the poem, because I could understand what you are saying, and I think the lines flow well.

thankyou, :) very much appreciated.

beautiful... and I understand you but I don't lie because I understand that when i die and look at the past I didn't live at all, just a big lie. What emotion should I show if I don't like it or never actually lived it. Love, sadness and happiness. Love your poem. :)

yeah, I'm glad someone does, kinda expected most people to just find me insane, because i guess i kind of am haha, but thanks for finding it "awesome" haha

this is awesome. i understand this poem, even if maybe only in my own way but it reflects a lot