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  • the reverend.

    the reverend. (100)

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    Oli, this is seriously incredible, it flows so well. So perfectly.

    I particularly like the line:

    "You in your ballet shoes danced in the crevice of my brain"

    For me, this has a lot of depth in it and imagery. It seems do delicate, in a way.

    Lovely <3
    April 5th, 2011 at 01:25am
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