Broken Friendships - Comments

Wow the words fitted perfectly together, truly. :)

I could feel the emotion in this, it was portrayed nicely. Really nicely done.

*Sighs* So depressing.

I've never read a poem like this, but I must say, I think it's awesome! Also well written.

oh wow I love it for it's style man The first time I've ever seen such a style so effectively used. I dabble with formatting quirks myself every so often but this is excellent. If you can make a habit out of this style of poetry you could get published and remembered.

It's also honest which I can dig as well.