Leaves Of September - Comments

ilovezackyvengeance (100)

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great poem :D this is way better than a published writer! keep writing (:

May 18th, 2011 at 01:26am

Eimie (100)

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I love this. It flows so well and I can't put my finger on it about what I really like about this, the imagery and the tone I loved the most.

However there was a grammar error or two but that's fixable.

April 11th, 2011 at 10:37am

Ivy-kun (100)

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the reptition worked nicely. keep at it :)

April 8th, 2011 at 12:07am

Last Friday Night (100)

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Great poem! Keep writing!

April 7th, 2011 at 09:26pm

persianninjatkd (100)

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I like it, I love your use of analogies, quite an interesting and sad poem =/

April 7th, 2011 at 09:20pm