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  • Violet Ice

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    this is truly awesome sauce !
    I love all the ideas you put into this piece from just using "Liar" and then "Karma" bites back. Keep on writing <3
    August 14th, 2011 at 03:55pm
  • purpleXrain

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    This is brilliant. I kept thinking it was going one direction but then it had something new, but in a good way, not a confusing way, y'know?
    I loved the ryhme in it and it was just really powerful.
    Well done dear (:
    May 8th, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • Ivy-kun

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    amazing.
    April 7th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • Glass.butterfly

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    BEAAAAAADUIFUL!
    April 7th, 2011 at 10:59pm
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